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Practice: OH GAWD.

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01/18/10 6:51 PM EST 18:51

Eh, inked now.

I FOUND A WAY TO SCAN MY SHIZ NOW. Camera memory card lol.

I'm so smart. C:
No you're dumb Mel. You're dumb.

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This is actually pretty good..

lol I love being an idiot. <3 :heart:

But no seriously I'm loving this one, second time drawing a back pose too~! I've been practicing too much sorry.. D:

Gonna be gone for rest of day, quickly posting this. D:

She says: "Eh? What?" in her language that I've made up, and no it's not Japanese >:U

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Tiffany-Mitsukai's avatar
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

I write a lot, probably without saying much..

Vision:
You've shown the idea of "eh, what?" very well. Everything from her pose to face shows confusion and qeustioning. Maybe this is misinturtputation, but I get the idea she's annoyed too; the surge of magic is a subtle detail, and that's why I love it. I'd very much lie to know what's going to happen next!
The only thing I'd complain about, is maybe, if she ought to look annoyed (which you may not have wanted) then maybe her face should show this more?

Orginality
I was going mark 5, but sonic style obviously has to kill that. Still, this character and the new language make up for this greatly.
I love the lanuage. The characters are regonizable, and not too difficult to master. They look well thought out, have interesting angles and are a set of text I'd love to try out some time.
The character, you've probably heard a ton on her before. The interesting markings and interesting hair styles are fantastic~

Technique:
Fantasic. The line art is really smooth and well done. You use an interesting mix of thin and thick lines, and hey I love stuff with well placed hatch shading!
There is also a nice flow, the hair, the tails and her necklace add a nice flowly feel, which I like a lot.
Is it just me, or has shoe size issues struck again?

Impact:
Very good impact.
I'm left wondering "What's going to happen?" and your art technique has me imagining your style in my mind's eye.
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